IMPORTANT NOTE ON CHANGE IN PORTFOLIO POST: This response is to be placed in your own blog, as a reply to your initial comment on your portfolio.
Post a short reflection about your portfolio on your own blog. This reflection can be the "conclusion" to your portfolio, with an invitation to your parents/guardians to reply. Their reply must include responses to following questions. You may copy paste the questions into your blog if you like.
- What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
- What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?
- Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?
- Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
Be sure to let your parents/guardians know that this post serves two purposes
- It is an opportunity for them to comment on your learning and
- It is part of my assessment of your attainment of General Learning Outcome #5, "Effective Communicator." Your sharing of the portfolio should enable your parents/guardians to reflect and respond to the four questions above.
4 comments:
We were impressed with Wix posting. We also liked how he reflected what he learned so far and how to improve.
Please take the time to read your writing out loud and take the time edit your work.
It show that his thinking of what to write and to choose a variety of vocabulary words.
Keep up the good work.
I enjoyed reading your Querencia Essay. It was descriptive and it conveyed your feelings of what your "special place" means to you.
I would like for you to improve on your spelling and proofreading your work.
I believe that your word choice and voice writing traits were successful for you this semester. I would like to see you improve on your organization.
Overall, I thought that your portfolio and layout of your web design was creative and appealing.
Keep up the good work!
I enjoyed reading the Roots & Recipes Essay because she expressed our families past and present.
Its the way how she expressed and desire from her own topic.
I liked the words that she used to characterized her topics.
I would also like her to improve the quality and how to interest others or how to give interest for others.
I enjoyed reading your Roots and Recipes essay. I liked that you make the dialog sound real. It also amazed me at how you remembered me and you making it.
I like that it was made on a website and you should try to get higher grades on them by explaining your topic more.
The ides trait. Because you made a big improvement on explaining yourself.
I thought your word choice needs little improvement.
I really loved and enjoyed your portfolio. Good job and good luck!
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